Six paragraphs from The Charm, a sweet sci-fi fantasy romance.
1. “No,
it’s not that.” He breathed in deeply and lifted his head, but his gaze
remained inward. “You know how I judge a man’s worth by his ability to meet me
face-to-face. She didn’t back down, Vacot. She didn’t look away, even though I
mentally challenged her. And as I stared directly into her eyes, at first I
thought they were blue. But all of sudden they were green. I thought it was my
imagination, when I saw them turn brown.” He looked up at the surymander. “Her
eyes change colors. Why?”
2. A
guard was waiting at the side entrance when they returned to the fortress. With
a brusque “Follow me,” Genesee was led to the costell’s audience chamber where
the man was pacing the room. Seeing her enter, he gripped his hands into fists
and took his seat on the elaborately carved stone chair situated before an
equally elaborately carved rock wall. Genesee glanced at what appeared to
either be a hunting scene or scenes of battle depicted on the bas relief, and
tried not to be intimidated by Carq’s reddened face.
3. Genesee
drifted in and out of sleep. Egan’s arm about her waist remained rock-steady,
allowing her to rest against his chest and shoulder. How she managed to relax
while on her feet surprised her.
4. Sticking
her arms in front of her, Genesee used them like a battering ram and struck the
man's arm. The jolt shuddered through her body, but her assault was enough to
knock the costell off his feet. The soldiers behind him skidded to a stop,
their whips held overhead. They glanced at their superior, then at her. None
looked at Egan. Their wide-eyed expressions showed their surprise and their
reluctance to pursue any further. Not with the person whose powers they had yet
to comprehend standing directly in their way.
5. Genesee studied the looming fortress. It was less blocky than
the ones in Unurit and Bein. Tall spires jutted into the sky, giving the
horizon an open maw, toothy appearance. No chasm circled it, but neither did
the village. The town itself sat in the background, apart and at a considerable
distance from the costell’s building. Unless there was a rear entrance into the
fortress, there didn’t appear to be any way for the townspeople to access their
costell except through the massive front gates made of interlocking metal bars.
The same gates that were slowly opening to allow her captors to enter.
6. Genesee
dashed into the chamber a split-second before the doorway collapsed. As more of
the fortress crumpled around them, Egan watched as she glanced at the three of
them. The floor heaved beneath their feet. He started to lose his balance when
Genesee ran straight into his arms. He embraced her tightly and buried his face
in her hair as the floor suddenly stilled.
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